Something different

[missweirdness.livejournal.com]

Since i'm a poet by some nature..I decided i should share my latest one. It's mostly about Maxime and St. Just in a kind of vague way.

xD

I hope you like it!

There's something missing
there's no heart in this
there's no heart in what's done
 
and it's nothing i'm willing to say
to change everything
 
there's so many ways
so many ideals that we molded
and it's incomplete
and people are unwillingly to follow those rules
and it's dark where i stand
 
it's my words
it's holding up so much
and if they look forward
it's weakening us
 
and i'm not afraid to keep going
 not afraid to be beyond myself.
there's a blessed heaven in all that we talk
it's where there will be no more speaking
and walking alone, i do this
 
Don't be afraid
they won't stifle the voices
the truths of what we're selling
so we're in deep
how could our reputations get out alive?
how could it when we were to die?
 
how could we show them?
and it's nothing i'm willing to change
and so incomplete is this dark
that i'm wandering to it
weakening but finding such inner strength..
 
but here we are
alone
and awake
alone and awake
i think we can't be dead
we can't be tossed aside
they can pollute our graves
pollute our images
but can we stop feeling what we feel?
 
Alone and awake, we're here
alone and awake, we don't cease to think
to talk
but all i see, all i feel is what's unworthy of others
alone and awake
we can't be dead
we can't be dead
 
it's us not being afraid
it's us not stifling our own voices
and we can't be afraid
not of what we've done
of what kind of world we created
what kind of place we kept envisioning
what we couldn't finish in our lifetime
it's by our deaths
that we complete it all
 .

Comments

[hanriotfran.livejournal.com]

WOW! I loved it...If I could write poetry, I think I would written this kind of poem for my two idols for ever and ever.

Let me said something: you are talented. You've been giften by God - the Supreme Being, of course! ;D - with poetry skills.

HanriotFran.

[missweirdness.livejournal.com]

Of course one has to be in a such a dark place like me to feel like maxime..and get the words across. thank you citoyenne :)

[hanriotfran.livejournal.com]

Why, MIssweirdness! You almost scared me! In what a dark place are you in, to feel like Maxime just over the time of being guillotined? You sound like you are young enough... :(

HanriotFran.

[missweirdness.livejournal.com]

I scared you? I'm sorry xD In a very very dark place; a conspiracy did oust me from my previous life, though i kept my head, but my life means almost nothing to me. =/ don't wanna rant too much ^^ we share that much in common..

[hanriotfran.livejournal.com]

Oooh...I understand you now. And yes...I suppose that a conspiracy also did oust me from my previous life. I almost can feel it.

HanriotFran.

[missweirdness.livejournal.com]

I feel like Robespierre, at least the stress part. >.> I bet he'd feel like me if he did survive. It doesn't help xD